What a crazy class......

Starter Join date : 2009-09-17 Posts : 2

My class,1250 is a crazy class.Last week,we have a swimming class.It was quite interesting.Our class are all boys,so we always look for girls.At that time,there were many girls sitting on the other side of the swimming pool.Then,we became crazy.We shouted at them and wanted to make friends with them.The girls were pretty nice and beautiful.they shouted at us,too.Our class leader,a crazy man, even shouted his phone number.Oh my god, unbelievable i just heard. They said 'yes'.That is so interesting.I will tell everyone others interesting things next time.Do you know Peter Lee?He is my friend.we are in the same class.He told me this website to practice English.I am not really good at English.If you find anything wrong.Please correct them.I hope I can learn more.

Subject: Re: What a crazy class...... Sat Sep 19, 2009 12:46 pm

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Subject: Re: What a crazy class...... Sun Sep 20, 2009 12:37 am

Alex wrote:: My class,1250 is a crazy class.Last week,we have a swimming class.It was quite interesting.Our class are all boys,so we always look for girls.At that time,there were many girls sitting on the other side of the swimming pool.Then,we became crazy.We shouted at them and wanted to make friends with them.The girls were pretty nice and beautiful.they shouted at us,too.Our class leader,a crazy man, even shouted his phone number.Oh my god, unbelievable i just heard. They said 'yes'.That is so interesting.I will tell everyone others interesting things next time.Do you know Peter Lee?He is my friend.we are in the same class.He told me this website to practice English.I am not really good at English.If you find anything wrong.Please correct them.I hope I can learn more.

Yeah, really crazy......

Subject: Re: What a crazy class...... Sat Oct 17, 2009 8:12 pm

Ya~ your class is really crazy!
But I think almost every boys will do the same thing like your class.
If they didn't have any girls in their class.

Subject: Re: What a crazy class...... Sat Oct 17, 2009 8:29 pm

Jenny Chang wrote:: Ya~ your class is really crazy!
But I think almost every boys will do the same thing like your class, if they didn't have any girls in their class.

I disagree very much, Jenny. There are many boy's (mostly private) schools, that I know, teach their boys high discipline and respect while in public.